Back to writing...

I re-wrote a couple more chapters. I have so much to learn about telling a story. Only four chapters to go.

I'm going to try posting a TIP a day, something that has caught my attention or made an impact on my writing. Right now, TIP stands for Today's Insider Perspective.

TIP: I read a tip on POV, from one of my judges, that the scene should be told from the character that has the most to lose. I find that helpful, though if I'm not sure there's actually anything to "lose," then I choose the character that is better suited for revealing the information. Sometimes it's the character revealing, and sometimes it's the character seeking the reveal.